"BRILLIANT!"

“Brilliant,” smiled He.

Thought she, “This is how it should be.

At least I am visible finally

Not perpetually walked over

Like transparent thin air.”

She had worked very hard

To come across His gaze

She’d tried by wit and looks to amaze

Again and again crisscrossing through his maze.

He is the lord though

He looks when He pleases

He doesn’t have to look away to tell you that He isn’t looking

But when He does that, all life ceases.

So when He actually acknowledged her

With a single blinding word, “Brilliant”,

Thunders flashed across barren deserts

And rain came pouring down everywhere.